She sat beside the lovely stream.
She enjoyed the idea
That she could be herself.
It was discreet and separate
From the people
Who always tried to judge her.
They never wanted to see
How much alike they really were.
Instead, they chose to strike her
When she was down–
Smash her hopes and dreams.
They seemed opposed
To helping her build
Her confidence.
She felt alone–
But there,
She felt vibrant,
Refreshed,
And at peace.
Being a loner in real life I truly relate to this, an amazing writing that seizes the fact that we in our own respect are complete. Thanks for sharing, please do have a look at my writings as well would love to know what you think about them 😊
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Thank you for taking the time to read this. I feel the same way, which is why it was so easy for me to write. I will definitely look at your writing! 🙂
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Thanks for creating such an incredible poem it really was touching to me personally, I look forward to hearing from you regarding my poems as well feel free to share your thoughts regarding any of my writings 😊
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I will definitely do so! I love poetry!
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I love playing with words and rhymes to kind of churn out the emotions in my heart that being a loner I wasn’t able to express so yea I love poetry as well coz it gives me a platform / outlet to express myself
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Some people will reduce others to their level because they want others to feel just as miserable. Your character is a powerful individual. Love this.
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Thank you so much! I am glad you took the time to read this and comment. It’s very much appreciated!
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i enjoy the honesty and flow that truly struck a chord. very impresive
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Thank you so much! I am very happy you took the time to read and comment on this!
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